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Ka mau te wehi Jackson. I like how you have given us two different options. Maybe next time you could add a part that is like something from a comic book rather than real life?
OK i will try make it better like Jacobs one
and make more than two options
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Ka mau te wehi Jackson. I like how you have given us two different options. Maybe next time you could add a part that is like something from a comic book rather than real life?
ReplyDeleteOK i will try make it better like Jacobs one
ReplyDeleteand make more than two options
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